It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
If you want to be an expert, you need to master one academic discipline. That is to say that broad knowledge requires investment of all time and effort, depriving you of the opportunity to concentrate on one specific area. A degree in general management is a prime example of how broad knowledge in multiple subjects can decrease your chances of landing a job. Superficial studying of economics, accounting, law and many other majors does not enable you to gain profound knowledge in each subject, nor does it allow you to become a competitive accountant, lawyer, or economist. My own case is not the exception. Having knowledge in a wide range of academic subjects, such as mathematics, statistics, and macro-economics, I realized that my hard skills were of no real use, which made me waste a whole year gaining additional skills to get a desirable job. With hindsight, I would immerse in a specific area of knowledge instead of learning a broad range of subjects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in general, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 407.700716846 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89634146341 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07749284725 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670731707317 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 618.680645161 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0660730676 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273169749381 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103963775805 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528202747963 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273169749381 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.