Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “Professional athletes are born with talent? You cannot train someone to be a professional athlete.” Provide reasons and examples to support your response.
In answering this question I would definitely disagree with the statement. It said that success came from 99% attempt and 1% talent. This phrase is explaining the reason why I disagree with the statement. In my personal view, not only athletes but also in our life this phrase is defining the success key. However, some people may say that athletics in their blood or athletic skills came from talent, but this is not true for me for three well explained statement.
First, if we repeat something over and over, our brain will settle down the action such as learning new techniques or memorizing new words. Like this repetition, not only talented athlete but also anyone can become professional athlete. For example, when I was in high school I was tall skinny girl who have no history of athlete in her family tree but I joined volleyball team every day until I become a pro. After all, I become the first athlete in my family, there was no athlete gene in my blood even thought I become pro by attempting over hundreds and thousands of time.
Second, daily preparation is key consideration to become pro in anything. Once, I heard that athletes spend most of their time in gym preparing for contest by doing daily preparation they improve their chance to win. However, if we compare the pro-athletes son and daily prepared athlete, the chance of winning in contest is definitely be the practitioner not inherited gene. Even compassion of their body can tell the result.
Last, courage and will is key mental consideration. Physical readiness is important but to become pro mental readiness is as important as physical. In this statement, coaches usually prepared trainer mentally to make them the best in world. For instance, if a man consider himself that he cannot became skilled trainer he will not even tried multiple times, but if a man have a willing to become greatest, he will definitely become one even there are no history of athlete like me.
In sum, in my opinion, anyone can be trained to become professional athlete if they have courage and will, constant preparation and repetition. Therefore, I disagree with statement that professional athletes are born with talent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, after all, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89247311828 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68972535767 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6326114756 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7894736842 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176489655827 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706114289016 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991927331065 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122510307974 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107425806604 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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