Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, due to the advanced of technology, it becames necessary for all people to have access to Internet, because by which they can do their tasks faster and more efficient. The contoversial question which arises here is whether, the goverment should provide the Internet access for all citizens at no cost. When it comes to me, it is my firm conviction that considering cost for Interntent is the better course of action for a government to do. To support this, there are several reasons two of which are going to be aptly explored in the following.
First and foremost, the most prominent reason which comes to my mind is that, people in some ages, especially young people, spend a bigger part of their time on Internet than older people. Moreover, some people may never use that services. As a result, it will not be fair for all citizens, and also it may provide the opportunity to youngsters to overuse Internent which is not beneficial for them. As an illustration, take the example of me and my grandfather. My grandfather does not have smartphone and he never spend his time surfing on Internet, on the other hand, me, spend most of my time chatting with friends through online chatrooms. Needless to say, the having access to Internet without any cost will not be beneficial for my grandfather as it is for me. In addition, if I am be supposed to pay for the Internet, I try to control my usage in the best way which help me to save my time in order to do more productive activities.
Furthermore, another noteworthy reason that should be taken into account is that, there are a lot of essential project in a country which need the financial support of the government. By considering money for provided Internet access, it gives the government the chance to spend on other productive projects, and also improve other services. For example, allocating a certain amount of money per gigabite of used Internet by people an required them to pay for in order to have access, provide a opportuniy for governmet to disburse more budget on environmental projects which are very necessary for keep people healthy.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the fact that the government should consider cost for tjhe Internet access which provides for citizens. The fact that the situatuin will be fair for all member and all of them will benenfit from the right, coupled with providing more budget for the government to invest in other crucial projects, is the reason which strengthens my claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 516, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...r does not have smartphone and he never spend his time surfing on Internet, on the ot...
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Line 2, column 789, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...r as it is for me. In addition, if I am be supposed to pay for the Internet, I try...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...per gigabite of used Internet by people an required them to pay for in order to ha...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ay for in order to have access, provide a opportuniy for governmet to disburse mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, in short, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80138568129 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74238507137 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482678983834 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1077070381 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.9375 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0625 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230744197618 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970863869859 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074382040279 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176368172366 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438999193706 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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