I neither agree nor disagree with the statement that governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. In my view, there are some advantages to why governments should make Internet access free. I believe that the three important reasons are to provide the internet for people who have been deprived of it for its cost, motivate people who want to develop digital marketing. However make internet access free has some disadvantages, for example, people may spend a lot of time on social media.
These days, the internet plays an important role in human life, People can increase their information and knowledge by searching on the internet. Now imagine that in one country some people have not sufficient money to pay the cost of the internet so they can not use the internet to increase their knowledge and information. Today, due to Covid-19 students should stay home and follow their school material from the internet, if one of the family can not provide the internet for their children, then their child will be deprived of education.
The internet has created an industrial revolution. These days, we hear news about Sturt -Up, and Digital Marketing that which have created many jobs. In the first place, the most Sturt-Ups that are being formed are facing many financial problems so governments should make free Internet access to decrease their problems. Providing free Internet allows people who work in the digital marketing area to advertise their products on websites such as Amazon. In fact, if people use the free internet, They will prefer to order their goods online, this helps people save time.
Although, providing free Internet access may have some negative effects on society. People may spend more time on social media because they are not concern about the cost of the internet. I recently read an article about the effects of the Internet, this article had claimed people who spend much time on social media are not efficient in their job or school. They pay attention to entertainment rather than to do their task or learning their lessons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... who want to develop digital marketing. However make internet access free has some disa...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...problems so governments should make free Internet access to decrease their proble...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...online, this helps people save time. Although, providing free Internet access may hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, then, for example, in fact, such as, in my view, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46560006357 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3311648095 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348782202443 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135322094487 0.076458572812 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114163780341 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225258744451 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829120504476 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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