Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Providing Internet access is just as important as other services such as building roads so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost Use specific reasons and examples | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is undeniable that the internet play a vital role in the society. In my opinion, I believe the governments should offer free internet access to their citizens. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.

First and foremost government can generate revenues for the country giving the citizens access to the internet at no cost. Obviously, by given the citizens free access to the net, more companies or firms will be attracted to advertise their products online. The government can tax these companies and the money generated can be added to the total revenue of the country. Moreover, this money can be use to improve the country by building roads, schools and industries which will help to create job for the inhabitants. My opinion on this matter is greatly influenced by my own personal experience. In the year 2019, the government of Nigeria decided to improve the use of internet in Nigeria, to encourage both private and public company to advertise their goods online. This greatly increased the number of internet users in the country and also, more people started to advertise their goods online. The money gotten from taxing those companies were added to the revenues gotten from other sources. Part of the money was used in building industries, which reduced the rate of unemployment in the country. This example clearly shows why governments should give their citizens free access to the internet.

Secondly, providing the native people with free access to the internet can improve the literacy of the people of the nation. Most importantly, the people that can't afford school tuition fees can learn on their own and in their own free time.For example, several years ago before the advent of the internet, many people in Nigeria couldn't afford the school fees and limited the spread of education in the country. Only the people from elite class can attend school because of the price. The rate of illiteracy was at its peak. When the internet was introduced in the country, the literacy rates increased tremendously, because people can now learn anything they want to learn online. Furthermore, the citizens can now fix what they want to learn at their own free time and pace. The number of educated citizens has been increasing since then. Had it not been for the free access to internet offered to the citizens by the government, the number of lettered individuals in the nation would still be low.

In conclusion, I believe governments should make sure the internet is available to all citizens of their country at no cost. This is because government can make money from it and also, it can improve the rate of literacy in the country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92324561404 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55559057863 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43201754386 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8671668915 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6086956522 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8260869565 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2685715328 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915770292794 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862188397698 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189562957553 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339845288989 0.0645574589148 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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