Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Government builds many infrastructures that are crucial for people to have a high-quality life. Internet is one of them that needs more attention considering its dramatic progress in the last decades. Due to its important characteristics, there is a long-standing discussion among people about whether governments should spend money on it like other infrastructures or not. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that governments should offer Internet to all citizens like other services, whereas others hold the opposite perspective. Although it is a little hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I believe that they should focus on it like others. It can help citizens to manage their life, use online learning and do online purchasing
To commence, one compelling reason is that Internet helps people to save time in order to spend it on other activities. It goes without saying that, time management in this overwhelming life is a master key to being a successful person. Generally speaking, using Internet is an efficient way to save and manage time. For instance, utilizing online navigation to find the fastest route when we want to travel in the city or outside, can save time and energy. An empirical study conducted in the US shows that people who use online navigation applications are happier with reaching to their work, particularly, when they are new in a city. As a personal experience, I remember that when I moved to Montreal, I used Google Maps to find an efficient way to my work I could save 20 minutes a day which had a pretty good impact on my satisfaction, because, I arrived home for dinner in the right time. This experience taught me that using internet based technologies can facilitate my life in new places.
Let us continue by considering the fact that online shopping is an inseparable activity in this modern life. To illustrate this point one need only refer to the number of online platforms that have been developed in response to people's needs. Statistics show people prefer to buy their needs not only in the meantime but also they want to review a wide range of qualities, styles and so on to make a decision. Needless to say that without internet these facilities are not available. Therefore, governments should assign more budget to this infrastructure. Economically speaking, obtaining taxes from this platform can help governments to spend more money on other programs they have on the table.
Furthermore, one should not forget that education is presented based on online platforms is these days. Generally speaking, internet can provide a university in our home by improving our knowledge which is a master key in many spheres of life, such as jobs, games, and workout.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are some exceptions which are excluded from the general role, I do believe that access to Internet is essential like other services such as building the road. It can help citizens for managing time, increasing their knowledge by attending online courses, and doing online shopping. I propose to governments to focus on it like services.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2602.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05242718447 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90658533132 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504854368932 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 838.8 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9474468383 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.130434783 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17391304348 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215382744088 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614419130463 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564024887534 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127295985418 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614922963269 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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