Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Reading and watching movies are most interesting things which people love to do. Basically, it completely depends on an individual that they have more interest in watching movies or reading a book. In other words, reading as well as watching movie both have their specify benefits.
As per my opinion reading is much more advantageous. If you have inculcated the habit of reading it would have following benefits which are mentioned in the essay.
First of all, Reading help an individual to improve their thinking as well as personality. It not only increase your knowledge but also improves your command over English language. This can be explained with an example as English is not our native language, so it becomes difficult if we are not used to it. Whatever, it may be novel or Fiction reading it would help to increase English fluency.
Secondly, if you are well used to a language you will effectively communicate with different culture people. Therefore, people will able to share their valuable knowledge with one another. Person can socialize with more ease and comfort in any environment.
So In my view even though you go through a newspaper than to you will be able to improve you interaction amongst people. If you want to improve your skill
over any language it completely do not depend on the contain, but what type of exercise you perform daily to improve them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as, first of all, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92765957447 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67244883911 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565957446809 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.46753884 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7142857143 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247111497995 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820967488477 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259390623903 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112571966433 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264512106644 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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