Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
It goes without saying that in this exhausting and stressful era in which we are living, having hobbies and amusements are of significant concerns. Some believe that reading books like novels and short stories are more enjoyable, while others argue that watching movies is the best. I agree with watching movies , and I make my side clearer in the next paragraphs.
First, in this superfast era in which time management is essential, watching movies can save more time than reading novels. In this regard, Since we have lots of things to do during a day, we occasionally have a lack of time to spend on entertainments and hobbies . Thus, shorter activities are preferable. Although reading a book is enjoyable, but it usually takes many hours even many days to get finished. On the contrary, watching a movie to the end often takes less than ninety minutes . For instance, it took me four months to read all the volumes of Harry Potter books while watching the movies took only five days. Moreover, I almost reviewed all the scenes written in the book and nothing significant was omitted in the film compared with the book.
Second, visual effects and human characters make the story more interesting. To clarify, there are so many words and descriptions in a book, and the author has just a pen in his hand as a tool to illustrate his intentions, while a director has various tools and technics to show his ideas and the feelings of the characters. Therefore, audience experience a more realistic atmosphere and can feel themselves as they accompany actors and actresses in all ups and downs of the screenplay. In this regard, a personal example can drive this claim home. I read the first volume of the Harry Potter two years ago, and I could not depict the face of Ron and never could imagine his characteristics, but when I watched the movie, I found him as a real person who had a distinct personality with a real face.
The last but not the least, watching a movie is a public hobby whereas reading a novel is an individual activity. To clarify, it is crystal clear that nowadays, families have less time to spend together; Thus, they need something to substitute for personal hobbies like mobiles and tablets. Although reading the books and magazines is a compelling amusement , but we should fight tooth and nail in order to make some public activity with our family and friends. Indeed, watching a TV makes it possible to share our moments with other members of our family and have fun together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76091954023 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65576683519 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9495506619 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8947368421 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154889557785 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501440921853 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451147680472 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101330839871 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347186542065 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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