Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
People like spending hours doing enjoyable activities in order to relax and spend a qualitative time, and for escape from reality. Some of the prefer fictional books, other watching movies. In my opinion, the latter one is better because it saves time and because of visual effects. I will explain my statement in the following essay.
To begin with, the duration of the movies is about two hours, and individuals do not have to spend plenty of time on this. Nowadays, most of the humans live at a rapid pace, inasmuch they have to deal with numerous responsibilities such us going to work, studying, cooking, cleaning, taking care of off-springs and so forth. As a consequence, individuals must organize efficiently their spare time, and reading books is not the best choice. Furthermore, all these activities are tiresome, and obviously watching a movie from a comfortable couch is less soliciting than reading a book, since books contain a lot of quintessential information that requires constant attention. For instance, back in college, I studied law, so there was a great amount of information I had to memorize. It was exhausting to learn by heart thousands of laws and rules, and applying these into practice was even more consuming. I can safely say that the last thing I needed was a book that requested my full attention. Not to mention that there were days where the concept of "free time" was nonexistent. As a result, I preferred to watch movies, because it was easier to follow the topic and engage with the action
To continue with, the film industry has significantly developed during the last decade, and many special effects improved. People's imagination went before boundaries, and they introduced us to unimaginable shows. Concepts as aliens with inhuman physical features, other beings, parallel universes, traveling through space and time, superheroes with superpowers, drag our attention and create excitement among viewers. Directors use high technologies in order to create all these details, and they provide to public unprecedented movies. Some would say that books contain the same details, but unfortunately, these do not contain visual effects, and therefore the impact is not as strong as movies'. For instance, one of my favorite films is Avatar. I have seen it a couple of times because I was impressed by the world design, a paradise that makes people dream about impossible things.
To summarize, as far as I am concerned, watching movies is more pleasant than reading fiction, mostly because I can save a lot of valuable time and because visual effects are more innovative than ever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12296983759 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89214464053 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580046403712 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2623319815 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.55 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168790816707 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474936437153 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490857219141 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112491832964 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306330399535 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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