Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Although it is undeniable that reading fiction books provide to some people a lot of amusement, I disagree with the idea that activity is more enjoyable than watching movies due to the reasons that I will expose in this essay.
First of all, reading demands more intellectual activity than watching a movie, making this is more tiring and less enjoyable. Activities that demand focus, such as studying and reading, are usually monotonous due to we have to receive the same stimulus during a certain period of time. In the case of reading a book, research indicates that people can perform this activity not more than 20-30 minutes without losing our focus. So, it is advised to take a break every half an hour to fresh our brain and continue reading. On the other hand, watching movies does not require high brain activity because you do not have to create a mental image of what is happening. Consequently, you can effectively receive information during a more prolonged period of time, which varies among 40 and 60 minutes. For instance, when I was an eleven-year-old child, I remember reading Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets and stopping every half an hour because I could not continue doing the same tedious activity for more time. I also remember that when I went to the movies to watch that very same production I could watch it for almost two hours, without getting bored. Of course, I was not utterly focused on the movie all the time, but I understood it very well.
Second, in the movies, you can watch special effects and intriguing scenes that keep you captivated and enjoyed for more time. Some people lack knowledge or imagination, essentials to continue reading without stopping. These attributes are not so essential in movies because everything is on the screen. The scenes give you all the information you need to understand the context, which, by the way, it is easier to understand because the oral language is simpler than the written language of the books. Moreover, special effects can delight you. For instance, when I watch "Avatar" I got impressed by the amazing landscapes, special effects, and original creatures. I believe that I reading a book with a similar history would not be the same due to the fact that I could not have imagined those strange creatures and astonishing landmarks.
In summary, from my point of view watching movies is more amenable due to less mental effort in comparison to reading a book, and additionally, it gives you a greater experience due to the special effects and imaginative scenes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
...eive the same stimulus during a certain period of time. In the case of reading a book, researc...
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Suggestion: period
...ive information during a more prolonged period of time, which varies among 40 and 60 minutes. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... and original creatures. I believe that I reading a book with a similar history w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, in summary, of course, such as, by the way, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90366972477 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7324552619 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5481068994 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.777777778 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203649817354 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643127117406 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576636912915 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141818096605 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504519400783 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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