Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Throughout history, there have been rules and regulations which people should obey them. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. I personally contend that nowadays young people have more freedom compared to the past. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerend with this issue that youngsters have more choices in their families than previous decades. In fact, in past decades, it was family that decided about prominent issues such as marriage, devorce, and occupation of its young man or woman. In today’s world, with the advancement of technology and and development of literacy, young people are ample knowledge and information to make wise decisions. For instance, family used to choose a decent girl for its son, however, nowadays young people get in touch with different girls and boys and eventually choose the best one.
The second rationale behind this issue is rooted in the fact that there were a lot of restrictions for young people which have been obsolete. For example, young man had to go military service and young woman was not allowed to go to school. These limitations was so strict that youngsters did not have any authority to opt his or her way of life. In order to make this point more clear, consider my grand father experience. When he was 18 years old, about 75 years ago, the military service was obligatory. My grand father did not want to recruit as a soldier. Therefore, he escaped from the country and after 10 years when mandatory military service was refuted, he came back to the country. As it is axiomatic, the circumstances in which my grand father lived is absolutely different from now.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realizes that although there are some society rules that limit youngsters, conditions are considerably more conducive for young people to thrive in comparison with the past.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: mind elucidating
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Suggestion: and
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Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...owed to go to school. These limitations was so strict that youngsters did not have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in brief, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05649717514 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73375697093 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564971751412 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3222705626 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.294117647 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205947078769 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646391123108 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818690930647 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143330585577 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883287691995 0.0645574589148 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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