Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is crystal clear that from the dawn of human beings, the existence of rules has played a vital role in every society. With this in mind and by reviewing history, it is obvious that people have required to obey rules in order to avoid society being chaotic. Hence, carrying out obligations have not had anything to do with time and sexuality, so we can see that people not only obeyed rules in the past when they lived in small herds, they also follow them now. I, personally, think that the rules that young people must follow today are not too limited because of the below reasons:
First, rules and obligations are the fundamental basis of establishing and managing society. They may undergo some changes and be restricted based on the situation of the society in each period of time but it does not mean that a specific group in a society will be under the strain of following rules. For example, if stores are forbidden to sell alcohol to young people under 18, it is because of the harmful effect which will contribute to societies’ disorders.
Second, nowadays which societies' concentration is on young people, they try their best to provide them a situation in which they do not feel anxiety since scientists warn that youth is a very important stage of life in which the personality of people is shaped. Hence, persons in this age must not be under the pressure of any group such as family, friends and even society. Therefore, societies focus more on the obligations which are about young people to provide them a situation which is proper for growth and succeed, so it seems that rules are such a preserver for young rather than restrictions.
In conclusion, take all the above reasons into consideration, rules of societies do not surround people especially young. They instead secure their future by creating an appropriate situation in which they can grow and be prosperous. Thanks to societies’ rules and obligations, no one can turn a blind eye on the crucial role of them in nurturing children from the first stage of their life until they get old.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, even so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79722222222 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65880641326 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530555555556 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2535249726 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.916666667 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231541535135 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906428047483 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655142829902 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146417951319 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654489190354 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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