Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better to be dishonest with people than to always tell them the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Honesty is the significant portion of the people’s relationship and communication, which suggests that individuals should comprehend whether they must be invariably fair. Personally, telling lie can be effective in certain situations, thus being unjust is acceptable and better for people. I feel this way for two main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, in virtually every communication, telling the truth about individuals’ disadvantages may cause friction, which signifies people can avert conflict by lying. Many people, especially women ask others about their behavior and appearance in order to be judged. In these circumstances, the disagreement may be occasioned if people make the point about the downside fairly. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, I was shopping with my girlfriend, and she was wearing divergent types of clothes. She wore the loose shirt, which seemed showy on my eyes. Therefore, I told her the shirt was looking ludicrous on her because I wanted to be honest with her. Unfortunately, she was frustrated because she thought it was her disadvantage of the body and skin tone. If I had lied, and told that she was expressive, she would not have been upset.
Secondly, Individuals need to conceal their personal downsides in order to be accepted by others. Otherwise they will end up having no close friends or satisfactory relationship with others. Moreover, people’s opinion about others is heavily influenced by the first thought about others. Therefore, individuals need to hide their unpleasant behavior or fact at least for the first time. For example, two years ago, my companion dated with the girl who abominates the men smoking cigarettes. On the date day, my friend did not reveal the fact that he is smoker because he was afraid of being neglected by the girl. Afterwards, he admitted the truth about his habit. However, the girl excused him because she had been already fallen in love with my partner. Furthermore, she stated that she would not have even date with my friend if she had known the truth before meeting.
Last but not least, gossiping individuals’ failure or private problem to others in order to be honest might cause severe problem. In this case, hiding minor things will contribute an opportunity to avert any relentless trouble. For instance, few days ago, my professor was absent in the class because of traffic jam. Nonetheless, none of undergraduates including me did not tell about it to the director of the university. Therefore, my teacher did not receive any punishment. If we had alleged about the instructor to others, she would have been punished. Furthermore, she would have communicate with us unfairly in light of personal experience.
In summation, I am of the opinion of being fraudulent in certain situation, especially when people allowed for whether the truth is minor or not. This is because people will be frustrated about the truth of their own downside, hiding own disadvantage will let others make fine deduction about you and gossiping may pose unnecessary trouble.
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...she had known the truth before meeting. Last but not least, gossiping individual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2635.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18700787402 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95461555613 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 809.1 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8762156514 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.43333333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128124656321 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353542091651 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304606555416 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819074521799 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209449713422 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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