Some people prefer doing sports on their own, such as running, while others like to do sports in groups. Which one do you prefer?
Physical exercises are beneficial for well-being of the mankind. Individuals choose different kinds of sports to improve their body fitness and health, and their way of doing the training may heavily influence their performance. I believe that carrying out bodily movements on my own can be advantageous for me. I have two rationales for holding this opinion, and I will develop these ideas.
To begin with, I can follow my plan independently, so I am likely to stick with it. People tend to change their decision or encounter with confusion when something of their plan is changed. Therefore, their aimed achievements could be disturbed because of these problems. In addition, when individuals achieve bodily exercises with others, their plan will be subject to change because any member of team might decide not to implement the workout. Hence, rest of the team will be also discouraged to do exercises in accordance with the agenda of the group. On the other hand, if people do physical movements alone, their plan will be less exposed to change because it is mainly relied on their personal motivation. As a result, they are more likely to adhere to their plan, compared to working with others.
Secondly, individuals can perform apt type of exercises, which signifies that they will do things effectively. Everybody has divergent body shapes such as fat and slim; they also prefer variant kinds of sports. For these reasons, if individuals accomplish the workout with their companions or others, they might do things ineffectively. Conversely, individuals can maximize the efficiency if they follow appropriate movements. For instance, I had been jogging with my female friend who is slower than me until the last month. I could not sprint as I want because I needed to wait her to keep up with me. As a result, I could not immerse myself to improve my speed of running. However, after I decided to run alone, I have been able to run as long and fast as I can, so I am developing my body rapidly.
In summation, doing the workout alone without having any partner can be helpful for most people including me. This is because our plan is unlikely to be sidetracked, and we can alter the extent of movements under our physical uniqueness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93157894737 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78216022408 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.744261437 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2380952381 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7619047619 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195691617097 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556325962307 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575920071452 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111860766781 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274226385942 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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