Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Individuals life experience have changed in accordance with development and acculturation. Personally, I believe that the life I am having is more superficial than events that my forefathers confronted. I feel this way for three main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, advancement in the industry and technology have facilitated many types of job and chores of individuals, which eased life of my generation. For example, my grandparents were grazing the livestock by riding a horse during harsh winter, when temperature hits almost minus thirty centigrade, which sounds relentless and arduous for me. On the other hand, nowadays, herders are driving car or utilizing other technology while performing such difficult activities.
Secondly, as the countries develop rapidly, law and regulation for the human’s right has become strict. Unfortunately, several years ago, major population of my country did not stick to obligations, and virtually accomplished whatever they want. For example, my grandfather stated that fights between men and injury associated with the conflict were commonplace among them, which signifies they were exposed to damage. By contrast, in today’s life, respecting others and not harming them is mandatory in many countries including my native nation. Therefore, I am available to live without being afraid of severe attack from others thanks to the law, which protects me.
Finally, study in the medicine and health care has advanced in my nation, which means I am capable of getting care of health concern without facing significant problem. Conversely, one century ago, the enormous portion of citizens including my grandmother passed off because of impoverished health care. For example, last year, I underwent the tumor of appendix because of improper nourishment. However, I recovered in few days without even becoming indisposed thanks to developed surgery system, and hospital funded by the government of my country. Unluckily, my father told me that my grandmother had suffered from the similar ailment as me until her demise because local hospital was devoid of surgery device, and general practitioner was not sufficiently professional. Provided that she had living in the conducive society as today, she would have recovered.
In summation, I am of the opinion of my way of living is more convenient and favorable than my ancestor’s life experience. This is because development of technology relieved my life, the ordinance caused composure, and health care is developed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2176.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52284263959 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05465261948 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611675126904 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1213172476 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.526315789 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17150653733 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526481874768 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475767398634 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101681571887 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229393847128 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.