Some people prefer doing sports on their own, such as running, while others like to do sports in groups. Which one do you prefer?
Physical exercises are beneficial for well-being of the mankind. Individuals choose different kinds of sports to improve their body fitness and health, and their way of doing the training may heavily influence their performance. I believe that carrying out bodily movements on with others can be beneficial for me. I have two rationales for holding this opinion, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, people can teach others what they know about exercises, so others can benefit from these consultations. Individuals have various type of knowledge about the workout they are doing. Hence, if they start instructing techniques of exercises, everybody of the group can improve their understanding about the movement they are accomplishing. For instance, last year, I was going to gym regularly to increase my muscle mass. Unfortunately, I could not see any improvement even after attending the gym for months. However, I made several companions who are advanced athletes there, and began accomplishing the workout together. Then, my partners taught essential techniques of the workout, and told me what I had been carrying our incorrectly. Therefore, because I comprehended significant things, I have improved my health and muscle efficiently as a result of doing sports with others. If I had been doing alone, I would have ended up failing to improve my body. Long story short, we can maximize the efficiency of method we utilize to perform exercises by learning from others.
Secondly, some members can motivate others to implement the frequent training, which means people are likely to adhere to their plan. Most people have problem associated with laziness, so they tend to stop their constant workout. However, if individuals have friends or trainers with whom they implement physical exercises, they will be encouraged by these people. For instance, I have a female friend who was willing to lose weight, but liable to give up her workout, which is the reason why she is still slightly overweight. Last year, I proposed her to begin jogging with me, and she accepted my suggestion. Thus, I have been motivating her to run frequently with me for nearly two months, so she has become beautifully skinny. She stated that if she had not found anyone with whom she does exercises, she would have given up after only two days. I am certain that having a partner helped her to stay incentivized for sixty days. To sum up, people can be motivated by other members of group with whom they work out, so they can keep pursuing their aimed achievements.
In summation, doing bodily movements with others can be the effective way of reaching our goal related to body shape and well-being. This is because we can study important things from others, and be encouraged by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2356.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08855291577 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81297906234 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535637149028 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1912326797 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.24 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.52 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.56 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135134935079 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393141310845 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055138287059 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904894193412 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206132525061 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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