Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is more important for students to study art and literature than it is to study math and science.” Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, students are learning different types of academic disciplines depending on their personal choice. In fact, what they study at schools can influence their life and the whole world. Human being has been taking advantage of the scientific knowledge throughout its history of the development. Therefore, I believe that investigating mathematics and science is more significant for young adults, compared to arts and literature. I have three rationales for holding this opinion, and I will explore these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, individuals should study the idea of high-tech devices in order to continue their useful advancement. In today's society, citizens have fine access to advanced technology which facilitates certain aspects of their life. To name but a few, smartphones, automobiles, constructions, and the internet have improved our situation of living. I am sure that more enhanced devices will be created by the following generations. However, if pupils stop immersing themselves to comprehend the notion of mathematics, further progress will be impeded, which means that we cannot live a better life.
Secondly, scholars in the branch of chemistry can invent new medicines and vaccines, which signifies that our lives are insured. human's lifetime is finite, and we are exposed to disease caused by various factors. In this case, only the scientific knowledge of scholars, and curing means made by them will protect our well-being. For example, during the time of the global health pandemic, art and literature are incapable of saving our lives. Nevertheless, the inoculation established by the well-informed professors and scientists can ensure our well-being and survival for a later time.
Finally, branches of social science will help nations to reduce the rate of crime and suicide, which, in turn, increases the life of the overall population. People are constantly interacting which other since we are living in the civilization, which signifies that we might be prone to several troubles related to communication. For instance, a rate of murder and self-killing are major problems in some countries, especially the developing nations. Fortunately, the scholars can help the authorities to diminish the number by giving their advice based on the concepts of fields of study of social science.
In summation, I am of the opinion that individuals need to learn mathematics and other sciences rather than the art. This is because ideas of mathematics will help people to create new technologies, chemistry will facilitate new drugs that cure patients, and social science can promote the societal interaction of peo
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47699757869 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0275872592 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590799031477 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9403791535 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129969737542 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380132958085 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411663873586 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722021003516 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313134327616 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.