People in society work in many different settings, and for a variety of reasons. What do you think is the main reason why people have jobs?
to feel happier about their lives
to save money for the future
to develop new skills
Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
In today’s world, many people are achieving different types of jobs as they are born for it. By the same token, although most individuals work for companies, they have divergent rationales or purposes of working. Personally, I believe developing new ability is the most essential reason for working. I feel this way for three main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays, having fine possession is virtually the baseline of socially accepted individuals, which signifies that people will seem successful in others’ eyes if they have a job. Of course, If individuals start being scorned by others because they are unemployed, they will probably have neuroticism about their life. Otherwise, they will consider life and their situation happy and satisfactory. For instance, my relatives and friends are always asking me that whether I am working. Unfortunately, my answer to their question has never been affirmative, which leads me to feel helpless about myself. Therefore, I began seeking for a job in order to seem having adequate life in others’ thought, and feel happy.
Secondly, workers are available to have friendly and kind co-workers at their work, so they will be joyed thanks to this relationship. Human-being is the social creature that will absolutely require the certain connection with other individuals. However, many people including me may have no companion if they do not have job, thus feel unhappy and lone. Fortunately, this problem can be solved readily if individuals start carrying out any job, and meet with new people at their work place.
Finally, in fact, people’s every activity has the underlying purpose of feeling happy and satisfied. In other words, individuals will intentionally carry out some things such as working, saving money, and developing ability because it will help them to feel overjoyed. When people receive the remuneration from the organization where they work, they can spend this money for essential things and enjoyable matters. For example, people may afford comfortable place, delicious foods and snacks, and even hanging out friends, all of which requires money but facilitate people to feel satisfied about the situation.
In summation, I am of the opinion that the most significant rationale of having job is to feel happy although the other side-purposes inevitably exist. This is because they will be accepted by others, have partners and co-workers at their job. Moreover, mankind feels satisfied when they are aware of certain needs are fulfilled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, of course, such as, in other words, to begin with, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33578431373 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84446279952 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55637254902 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5606534549 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.19047619048 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278852463356 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920020691623 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518738064627 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172879080625 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062415596409 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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