Do you agree or disagree with the following statement statement？It is better to make friends with intelligent people than
with the people who have a good sense of humor.
Meet people and make friends is an irreplaceable event in life, no one can avoid making friends, because you will meet diverse people from all over the world in the university. However, you need to take people's personality into account when making friends, there are people who have a good sense of humor and people who are intelligent, if I was asked to only pick one type of people from this two, I will prefer make friends with intelligent people.
First of all, friend who is intelligent often accompanied with other good personality. There is no denying that intelligent friend can help in improvement in school performance. By making friends with intelligent people, you are more likely to be positively influence by the intelligent people. For instance, in class you will have more chance to cooperate with the intelligent, which will enhance your understanding of the class, because the intelligent friends can give you comments and suggestions based on their experience. Sometime, your intelligent friends can support you when you have any questions, they are able to answer you with the knowledges.
In addition, work with intelligent friends can improve the organization and enhance the critical thinking. There must be a causation for those people to be intelligent, it could be the good organization they have. Meanwhile, you can learn how people get intelligent and imitate their lifestyle, in order to improve own organization and take a chance to get better personality and skills.
Admittedly, a friend with a good sense of humor could bring joyfulness and laugh. However, in the busy university life, an intelligent friend is more prefer than a friend that only bring you happiness, the principal of the university is to gain knowledge and earn real life experience, we do not spend too much time on entertaining.
In a nutshell, a friend who is intelligent is first priority of friend choice. Not only can they provide assistant in class, but also they provide a model for you to imitate.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06606606607 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93159853077 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474474474474 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5709544862 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412412929788 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159474433493 0.076458572812 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889108502227 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225604608687 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919688173575 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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