Which one is the most important factor to help you work productively:
A. Having an environment free of noise and distractions;
B. Knowing that you will receive a reward;
C. Doing something you are interested in.
Working productively is very important when having vital event to do. Associate with the productivity, the environment where you doing the things is important too, the environment you stay will help you work productively. Some people claim that environment is not the most important factor, instead, they believe doing something you are interested in is the major factor. However, I believe that having an environment free of noise and distractions is the most important factor to help you work productively, and in this essay, I have some reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, working requires no distractions and noise. Library is the perfect example where is representative to the idea. Students always go to library for studying, because it is a place without noise and distraction, students can fully focus on studying in this environment. If there is noise and distraction around the students who want to study, it is hard for the students to focus on the work, since there is an unfavorite noise trying to catch your attention. Personally, I also experienced the same situation before. When I was trying to focus on studying for my psychology exam, my friends were playing game next to me, and they played the sound out loud from the speaker, even though I know I should not be distracted, however the sounds alway triggered me to look to the friends. And then I got angry because of my friends, which cause me no longer focus on reviewing, instead, I started to yell at my friends.
Sometime knowing that you will receive a reward is helpful to magnify the productivity, however, it also cause diffusion of attention. While you are doing work, you may also thinking what the reward is, which causing lower productivity, because your mind is not focusing on the work only. Also, knowing that you will get a reward will automatically low the quality of the work. To be more specific, people may shorten the working period since they are desiring the award, in other words, people are doing their works for the award, and they are not actually working for the achievement.
In a nutshell, working in an environment free of noise and distractions is the first priority for me, because a quiet place will help me to focus and complete the important things I need to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, while, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84143222506 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79301920855 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475703324808 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4747517334 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.3125 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455789970937 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156567797519 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144397624746 0.0737576698707 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285686828405 0.150856017488 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191101501816 0.0645574589148 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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