This is a hot debate topic whether students are more influenced by their teachers or friends. Many believe that students life is very much influenced by teachers. I personally believe that students are more influenced by their friends. There are many reasons to this which I am going to explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, in my opinion a person is more influenced with whom he/she spends time. A child spends lot of time with his/her friend either he/she has to play, study or to complete assignment. There is very much reliance of a student on his/her friend. For example, in my student life I very much relied on my friends, I always hesitated to clear my doubts with help of my teachers. Moreover, my friends knew that in which topics I was good at and in which topics I face problems. In case I had to take of my teacher than it was a big task for me. Thus, it can be said that I have much influence of friends as compared to the teachers.
Besides this, the friends are of same age group so the comfort a child can feel with them cannot be replaced by the teachers. Being of same age we can talk on any topic or can share any issue with friends without giving any second thoughts. In case of teachers a student cannot get very much comfortable with them. The comfort level is also an important aspect to get affected by someone. Additionally, there is a generation gap between a student and teacher so the comfort level between them cannot match with one shared by the friends. Therefore, it can be said that children are more influenced by their friend rather than the teachers.
Finally, the contact with teachers may not last long while the good friends are there with us for life long. The tempo we share with our friends is very warm. A student usually have this feeling in mind, thus, the friends have much more influence in a child's life. For example, I have few school friends with which I am in contact with but there is only one school teacher who is in contact with me, as the teachers are not very much active in social media and it is difficult to keep the phone number updated.
In a nutshell, it can be said that students are more affected by their friends as compared to the teachers due the reasons stated above. I personally have more influence of my friends over teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... teachers or friends. Many believe that students life is very much influenced by teacher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48820754717 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39050791243 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412735849057 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2512430974 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7391304348 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4347826087 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28331103743 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105891274742 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984326311572 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19801484247 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835002328495 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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