Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students can learn as much by watching movies as they can learn by reading books.
In my opinion, it is currently more simpler to keep up a high standard of health than it was in the past.
To begin, there has been a significant expansion in both the body of medical knowledge and technological capabilities during the past few decades. As a consequence of this advancement, improved treatments for a wide variety of diseases and conditions are now available, and the prevention of health problems has become much less complicated. For instance, vaccines are now available for a wide variety of diseases that were once extremely common and sometimes fatal, such as polio and measles. Additionally, we have dramatically improved treatments for cancer as well as other illnesses. In addition, there are now more accurate tools available for monitoring our health, such as blood pressure monitors and fitness trackers. The Fitbit is a well-known fitness tracker that can, among other things, determine your heart rate, the number of steps you take, and the number of calories you burn.
In addition, a rising number of people are becoming aware of the need of making healthy decisions about their lifestyle, such as maintaining a healthy diet and engaging in regular physical activity. This can be attributed, at least in part, to the greater availability of information on health and fitness. There are now a great number of websites, apps, and other resources available that provide recommendations on how to lead a healthy lifestyle. WebMD, for instance, is a website that offers information on several areas of healthy living, such as food, exercise, and other topics. Users are able to monitor both their eating and their exercise routines with the help of the software CaloryCounter.
In conclusion, during the past several decades, accessibility to medical care has dramatically improved in many parts of the world, making it much simpler for individuals to receive the medical attention they want. For instance, an increasing number of nations are moving toward offering universal healthcare, which indicates that all people have access to fundamental medical treatments. In addition, the governments of a number of countries have enacted laws and regulations that make it mandatory for businesses to provide their workers with health insurance. For instance, the Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act (ACA) is a law that has been enacted in the United States. This law mandates that companies that have more than 50 employees must offer their employees with health insurance.
In conclusion, I believe that it is much easier to take care of one's health today than it was in previous generations.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
In my opinion, it is currently more simpler to keep up a high standard of health th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... that it is much easier to take care of ones health today than it was in previous ge...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24170616114 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95883043919 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518957345972 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3077934493 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0590282701267 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191885029018 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268235229479 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0299135890348 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159637252108 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
In my opinion, it is currently more simpler to keep up a high standard of health th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... that it is much easier to take care of ones health today than it was in previous ge...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24170616114 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95883043919 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518957345972 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3077934493 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0590282701267 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191885029018 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268235229479 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0299135890348 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159637252108 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.