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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should assign homework for students every dayBut the big argument among teachers is that how much homework is enough for students? do they do assignment every day?

Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should assign homework for students every day
But the big argument among teachers is that how much homework is enough for students? do they do assignment every day?

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No body doubt that doing homework play a pivotal role in helping children to be successful in their education and also doing assignment help students to promote their efficiency on their final exams. Some people believe that student should have assignment every day. They believe that more homework lead to more promotion and if students do assignments every day, regularly, it helps them to be a responsible individuals. While, others believe that if teacher assign homework for students every day, it may bring bad effects on students. Personally, I agree with the latter idea. I think the disadvantages of every day assignments are outweighed by its benefits. In what follows, I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to support my point of view.
Although, being successful in school is a primary goal for students, but students need entertainment as well. And also students suffer from stress and anxiety of difficult lessons at school, so participating in entertainment activities is necessary for students since it helps them to relieve their stress and reduce the level of their anxiety. For example, participating in club, going to park with their friends and so forth. If they have to do assignment every day, according to that they spend most of the hours of the day at school, they have no time to do entertainment activities accordingly they can't release their stress and it is harmful for their health and it effect on their behavior as well.
Second, school should be an inspirational place for students, they should find school a wonderful place and enjoy of being and attending in school. If teachers bombard student by homework every day, they find school a boring place and their incentive for continue their education in their further may be reduce due to bad memory of their schools.
To make a long story short, I believe that although having assignment every day may improve students grade in their lessons but it can cause more harm than good in long turn. All aforementioned reasons point to my idea. However, an important issue that must be mentioned is that this cannot be used as a prescription for every body and some counter examples might exist. (366)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'Nobody'?
Suggestion: Nobody
No body doubt that doing homework play a pivota...
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Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'individual'?
Suggestion: individual
...arly, it helps them to be a responsible individuals. While, others believe that if teacher ...
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Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., it may bring bad effects on students. Personally, I agree with the latter idea...
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Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tertainment activities accordingly they cant release their stress and it is harmful ...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effects'?
Suggestion: effects
...d it is harmful for their health and it effect on their behavior as well. Second, sch...
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Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uce due to bad memory of their schools. To make a long story short, I believe th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99455040872 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75997454349 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49591280654 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2456366488 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5625 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355623101742 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131311303539 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908990199288 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225319996418 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113645206848 0.0645574589148 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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