is it better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
There are many factors that parents consider to grow up their children , one of these factors is the environment which children grow up in. some people believe that it is better for children to spend their childhood time in a big city, because they have more opportunity to go to elite schools and some extra classes that are not available in countryside. While, others believe that countryside is a better place for growing children up, they believe life has many different aspects and it is not just education that is important for children's especially in their infancy, they think children expose to many wonderful things in countryside that do not exist in cities. Personally, I agree with the latter idea since in countryside children gain a lot of rewarding experiences and they play in a healthy and tangible environment. In what follows I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to justify my point of view.
People who live in the countryside are very kind and are really willing to lend a hand to their neighbors in crisis. They also spend their most of their time together and care about each other. I believe that these people are great teachers for children. Children are motivated by their behaviors and learn that helping people is an obligation for everybody . However people in the cities often are too busy to care about their neighbors. So living in countrysides help children to improve their social behavior and help them to be a supportive person in their future.
Countrysides have natural, mystery and tangible green environment which help children to apply their curiosity to discover new things and gain a lot of wonderful experiences. For example children can play in jungle or near the river so they face different animals and plants and get a lot of information about them directly. So
Finally, Children need a healthy diet especially in early of their lives to strengthen their body. In countrysides healthy food are easily accessible and people cultivate organic vegetables and fruits, and high nutrient food are available by a low cost as well, for instant fresh milk, cheese, and so forth. While In the city children's diet often involve unhealthy and junky foods and organic foods are extremely hard to find in cities and are much more expensive. Therefor, there is higher chance for children in countryside to have stronger and healthier body.
To make a long story short, living in countryside have many benefits for children and help them to be a kind, sociable and healthy individuals in their future. All aforementioned reasons point to my idea. However, an important issue that must be mentioned is that this cannot be used as a prescription for everybody and some counterexamples might exist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider growing'.
Suggestion: consider growing
There are many factors that parents consider to grow up their children , one of these factor...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
...rents consider to grow up their children , one of these factors is the environment...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
...wing children up, they believe life has many different aspects and it is not just education th...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
...ng people is an obligation for everybody . However people in the cities often are ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...people is an obligation for everybody . However people in the cities often are too busy...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...t of information about them directly. So Finally, Children need a healthy diet es...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, really, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98910675381 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74894744267 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494553376906 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1528054209 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.95 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268446569744 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814144878533 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728241039488 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144202891258 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101735556914 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.