Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social
or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to
support your answer.
Some people argue different interactive teaching method lately. The education professionals believe that teachers state their political or social regards. Benefits and shortcomings of this view have been a controversial issue in the public soon. Although both sides have several pros and cons, I am of the opinion that teachers should preserve their neutral positions in the classroom. I will elucidate the details of my support with some tangible details and examples in the following paragraphs.
In case of the teachers describe their political or social positions, some undesirable results may be seen in the educational surroundings. These can affect teachers and students in some conditions. Political debates All students have various intellectual capacities so some of them may feel under pressure from the political disputes’ results. On the other hand, age groups are significant learning factor. Teachers should be careful interacting with the students. In some age groups, students can not understand teachers’ political beliefs, because they have limited capacity to perceive the world. Moreover, all these factors may decrease the quality of education.
All people have the right to express their opinions about political or social situations. We cannot expect all teachers to have the same thought. The differences are a crucial factor in the educational setting. Disagreement among the teachers that influence their performance and bilateral relations. Moreover, in some countries school managements follow the teachers’ behaviors in closely. If they have distinct thoughts, they may differ on many issues. An unsuitable education environment impress the teachers some adverse aspects. Thus, teachers should save the aim positions in the school environment.
Some people support that teachers should their political views and opinions. Opponents of this argue that discussion environment is beneficial for students at an early age. However, I am at varience with these statements. It is difficult to provide equal and transparent education among students. Many countries face hard situations to create an interactive education environment for students. There maybe some develeopment gap between interregionals in the educational system. Teachers have a significant contribution to the development of their students. So, the Teachers’ expression of their political views and social opinions can be used for different purposes in underdeveloped countries.
To sum up, teachers’ dialogue with students has always been the subject of discussion. The teachers prefer to explain their thoughts, yet these may have negative results. In the undevelopment countries, teachers may face under management pressure, if they do not have same ideas with politicians. Sophistication level determines how trainers behave to students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83014354067 4.8611393121 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09301278641 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521531100478 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7271689582 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.15625 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0625 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21875 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249424785643 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694200984016 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630078023708 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158367049843 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299997611249 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.65 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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