Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Teaching is the knowledge that is acquired insofar as people grow. We are taugh by parents, teachers and professors about subjects of the world and those which we learn through life experience. To older people, there is really nothing that they can learn from an young person because they have already been learning during their lives.
First of all, an young person should learn from old people instead. They have a lot of information and life experience to convey. When I was young, I remembered listening to my grandmother's speeches and they were very helpful to me because not only did they help me with my studies but also, they were part of my life. For example, they helped me to choose the right direction to succeed in life.
Moreover, learning is a process which takes a long time to be absorved. Only people who have already lived enough can, in fact, teach those who have not done yet. It is very unlikely to say that an infant has a profound knowledge about a subject if he hadn't had a background information from primary education. Hence, infants need first to be taugh about the matter to further teach others.
However, nowadays, as we are living in an electronic era, we can see many young people teaching elderly how to use cellphones and laptops. Since in the past there were no electronics, old people have not learnt how to make use of them. Mostly, they ask their grandson's help for assistant because it is required for everyone to be able to use cellphones, otherwise they may not get in touch with anyone.
Finally, knowledge is acquired throughout life and only people who have lived for a long time have got it and are able to spread it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...really nothing that they can learn from an young person because they have already ...
^^
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ning during their lives. First of all, an young person should learn from old peop...
^^
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...rofound knowledge about a subject if he hadnt had a background information from prima...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for example, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63513513514 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44295770874 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5182095861 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133104024356 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480849289777 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456913694211 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775726438156 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436182673733 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.