Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to whether it is important to work with a high speed or to work slowly and be accurate has been brought to the attention of many successful companies that are operating in today's world. Relevant people argued that it is vital for workers to take their time and be correct. In my opinion, nowadays the demand of working fast has significantly increased, so people will need to work quickly to fulfill this high work flux.
First of all, contrary to the belief that it is better to take the time and be highly accurate on what you are doing, evidence has shown that people who were capable of swiftly completing their job, were more likely to get selected as the most preferred potential employees. To illustrate, in this time of age, many retail companies, tend to hire employees that have the ability to work fast. They think that with the development of technology, the system could easily track minor mistakes made by workers. So for them, it is more important that a worker could have the skill to handle demanding jobs, by working fast. That is why, if people want to get hired, in today's world should be able to quickly complete their tasks.
Secondly, working with a high speed is important because people will obtain their jobs for a long time. For instance, My experience as a workforce in the pharmacy field is a compelling example of this. A decade ago, when I came to the United States, I saw that the workload was three times higher than it was in my own country. In order to maintain my job in the pharmacy, I had to have the skill of multitasking and be able to handle properly the workflow. If I could not resist and perform those duties, the manager would immediately had fire me, and look for another candidate that could work fast. According to this experience, multitasking skill is important because performing multiple tasks at the same time, requires working with a high speed.
In conclusion, in modern society, people should work fast because individuals will get hired by successful companies especially retails, and are going to maintain their job for a long time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: fired
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71866295265 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61740039591 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523676880223 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.802943877 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187190211667 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680722065081 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460338972848 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118772337982 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436904606592 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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