Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
It goes without saying that in today’s progressive and competitive world where we live, human being is preoccupied with the very conception of risk taking and challenges in life. While some people believe that it is more significant to quickly accomplish one’s work and make risk in life, others stand at the other side of the continuum, believing that it is better to work slowly in order to become assured that everything will be correct at the end. Personally I’m inclined to the former assumption. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will clarify in the following essay
First of all, doing work at a smooth rate will result in the final outcomes more effective and efficient. I believe during performing a job, people learn a lot of new and updated concepts about the area, so by using them, the results show effectively and efficiently. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I worked at the hospital, I did my task at a slow rate and reviewed every detail two or three times and also compared them with updated online information. Many times my supervisor told me that my work is more useful than my colleague who was working on another part of the project and due to a higher rate, his errors increased. Over time because of participating in a different project, I realized that working in this way optimizes results.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that, Working slowly, although it allows people to do less in terms of the number of tasks, on the other hand, makes them successful because they are done correctly, and over time these successes bring high self-confidence and self-esteem. For instance, my friend who working on jewelry design, spent about 1 year designing a set of jewelry for young women. During this time, everyone blamed her for working so slowly and earning no income. But in the end, with the care and patience she put in, a wealthy client was found and bought the whole set so she made good money, Also, this work sample made it find good customers over time and even became famous in this field.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons and points into account, I do believe that working slowly and being sure about the correct consequence of it outweighs working quickly and making risks. In this vein, people will optimize the outcome of their work and enhance the level of their self-confidence and self-esteem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... working in this way optimizes results. Another reason which deserves some words...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82409638554 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6596450354 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575903614458 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9248866521 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.466666667 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275877412665 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843406877629 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780702769033 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178461328195 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557978529097 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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