Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is indisputable that competition in the work environment is getting rougher in today's world. Employers are looking for the most qualified employees to hire them. in other words, the more precise and detail-oriented is the employee, the more qualified he is. Therefore, I contend that it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct, I feel this way for two main reasons that will be explored in the ensuing paragraph.
To begin with, trying to finish quickly will waste a lot of time. In fact, it will take a longer time to fix the resulting errors than taking enough time to do the job properly. My experience is an illustration of this concept. I work as a dentist and I had a late patient at the end of the day. It was late at night and I was tired so I finished restoring his teeth without following the best practice protocol. However, he came the next day because his tooth restoration pulled out. thus, I spent more time fixing his teeth and I wasted more material. If I didn't work so fast the last night, I wouldn't have wasted extra time fixing the errors, For this matter, taking enough time to finish a task and making sure everything is correct, is crucial in any job.
Also, when an employee is detail-oriented and watches the quality of his work, it reflects on his reputation. Hence, he gets promoted quickly. To be particular, the employer wants precise employees to manage their businesses. They would observe the quality of their employees even if they take a longer time to finish their work. For instance, my friend works at a major alcohol company, she is so passionate about her job. She had to stay late in her office after everyone left and finishes her tasks perfectly. This had a positive impact on her reputation. Eventually, she became known for her hard and error-free work and got promoted. That's why slow work with fewer mistakes is definitely better than quick work with many errors.
In conclusion, it is wise to care more about the quality of the work done rather than the quantity in today's world that is too competitive to tolerate frequent mistakes.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65796344648 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64525526172 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535248041775 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1997608101 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273605730049 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695422887533 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933759430493 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182152710361 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956853285514 0.0645574589148 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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