Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today." Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people agree that cars would be an inseparable part of the society in near future. Personally, I believe the use of automobiles not only doesn’t decrease, but on contrary will surge. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, although majority of people posses a car for their transportation to university or workplace, there are still some people who care about the environment around and refuse to drive a car to their destinations. These people rather public transportation and bicycles than vehicles. Almost all of them share the same concerns about cars fumes and its negative impact on the global warming and air pollution. However, by immense endeavor that scientists invested on developing electrical cars, they have been used in the recent years and it is anticipated that their use will expand in the future. These cars produce no fume and they only work with electricity so there is no need to oil and coal. These environmentally friendly cars leave no pretext for anyone against them.
Furthermore, there has always been a shared concern of car accident, among families, when they wanted buy their kids a car. According to the statistics, car accident have always had an immense share in the causes of death in every country. Most of the accidents are due to carelessness of drivers. As a result, most families refused to purchase car for their kids. However, the advent of self -driving cars can eradicate this concern forever and leads to more purchasing of cars. Self-driver cars are almost a new but hot topic among engineers and companies, and there are already some companies which initiated manufacturing these cars. This subject has so many aspects that need to be developed and hopefully it will be done in the near future.
In conclusion, technology is progressing every day in a rapid pace and in the future developed cars will tempt more people to buy one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cars will tempt more people to buy one.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, still, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76458331045 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8689965482 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173265190566 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544154989475 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356651928695 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107964236572 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418792842509 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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