I believe that after twenty years, we will have more cars than we have today. In the following passage, we will examine, why I feel this way.
First, the major problem with car today is that they run on fuel and causes a lot of pollution. But in 20 years period, we can expect a major shift in the number of electric cars. Today, they are not economical for the average consumer, but with advanced research, the technology will improve, and they will be more feasible for consumers. Then it will be more common to see electric cars on roads when compared to today. With the rise of electric vehicles, the problem of pollution will be solved which can be a major factor leading to lesser use of cars in future. Moreover, we can see cities like Los Angeles and San Francisco, are not built keeping in mind the use of public transport and therefore it will now be more difficult to change the model of these types of cities. With the rise of electric cars, the number of cars in these types of the city is, surely, not going to decrease.
Second, with the rise of educated people in a country like India, more and more people are shifting their lives to a city. This will lead to a rise in the population of cities. With the rise in electric vehicles, more people are going to buy a car for their families. In a country like India, a car signifies the status of people. Due to this type of mentality, the car market in these types of the country will rise.
Finally, Governments will encourage people to use public transport more often, but this will not stop people from buying a car for themselves. People could use public transport for going to their jobs, but they will buy a car to travel with their families. Also, with the rise in global temperature, people will prefer to travel by car more frequently.
Due to the above reasons, I feel the number of cars in upcoming years is going to rise.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...or factor leading to lesser use of cars in future. Moreover, we can see cities like Los A...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46571428571 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31181702546 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422857142857 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5158697451 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230066309875 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870732434056 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042688822365 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131715249584 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534132398479 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...or factor leading to lesser use of cars in future. Moreover, we can see cities like Los A...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46571428571 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31181702546 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422857142857 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5158697451 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230066309875 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870732434056 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042688822365 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131715249584 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534132398479 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.