Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the advent of modernization, cars have been playing an influential and tremendous impact in our daily lives. It is utterly important to appreciate their indelible effect on the society. Although, some people hold a point view and agree with the idea that in 20 years there would be less cars in use. However, others hold a different view point and disagree with this idea. My personal experience and actual observation of life, have led me to disagree that in 20 years the number of cars will be less than nowadays. In this paragraph I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first most important reason is that, many people recently are living far away of their work, Since living in the center will be very expensive, so they can not afford paying for that. For instance, I live in one hour away from my work, I am unable to afford renting an exorbitant apartment, so I use my private car every day to commute my work at the exact time. This situation led me to believe that in 20 years, still there will be more cars available to be used by people.
Another reason that need some words, recently the public transportation is already under heavy burden. Even though, the distance between two consecutive metro station is few minutes, people are still needed to waite for several metros to get in. For example, before I bought my car, I had to wait for three metros to squeeze myself into the crowed. that is why I decided to own my private car, to get rid of this mess. This event, have led me to insist on my opinion that the people will use more cars in the future and the cars will never be curbed.
Admittedly, even thought the fuel prices have been increased more than before. However, this is offset by the increasing the financial salary. So, this issue was never been a problem that limit the car use in the future.
In a nut shell, judging all what I have mentioned above, taking all factors into considerations, I reinforce my idea that using cars in the future will be continued and never restricted. Not only because people are settling far away of their jobs, but also because public transportation may be a time consuming in most of the time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he idea that in 20 years there would be less cars in use. However, others hold a dif...
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Suggestion: to rent
...way from my work, I am unable to afford renting an exorbitant apartment, so I use my pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5637755102 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47608301329 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0355797439 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1578947368 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218559213186 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695158727968 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664013357335 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123380986006 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452502385683 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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