Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, cars play a significant role in our lives. They are the most useful device we have. However, we need to agree that they are also expensive for buying and maintaining. personally, I agree with the statement above, there will be fewer cars in use in twenty years.
In my opinion, I strongly believe that the number of the cars will decrease in the future. There are couple reasons why I think that way. First, the price of fuel is increasing almost each month and this would be one of the biggest reason why some people especially the middle class population would have to give up on cars. Also, maintaining a car requires a big investment. For example, we have to change to oil often, change the wheels each season or pay close attention to car's brakes, all of those services cost lots of money.
On the other hand, if you live in a big city the traffic gets crowded every day and it takes you time to get to work in the morning. If this would continue for couple more years people would get tired and would like to take public transportation like buses and trains instead. This way they will save more time, also the cost will be lower, and it will increase the live quality. I believe this because of my experience I have in my live. I live in Chicago, and I need to drive for work every day about fifty minutes. But, this is not to bad, the worst part is when I am coming back home. In the time, I am returning from work there are lots of cars and other vehicles on the streets and I have to wait in high ways for more than one hour, so in total in takes me about two hours to come back home. I can say I get more tired driving, then working. I have thought couple times to leave the car home and take the train to get to work. This way I will save time and money in the same time. Furthermore, I will be more relaxed because I do not have to stay concentrated driving , trying to avoid any possible accident.
To sum up, I strongly agree that cars are something important and it is good to have a car, but in the same time we have to spend a lot to buy them and they requires a good care.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... useful device we have. However, we need to agree that they are also expensive fo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
...o expensive for buying and maintaining. personally, I agree with the statement above, ther...
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Suggestion:
...bove, there will be fewer cars in use in twenty years. In my opinion, I strongl...
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Line 2, column 411, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'oil'.
Suggestion: often oil
...ment. For example, we have to change to oil often, change the wheels each season or pay c...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...do not have to stay concentrated driving , trying to avoid any possible accident. ...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...ave to spend a lot to buy them and they requires a good care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for example, i think, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17444717445 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23083786755 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503685503686 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7234985078 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9047619048 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176165413819 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582665984738 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860686450779 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124086240102 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847129915591 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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