It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
Although the knowledges gained from the books have a major role for everyone,nevertheless experience is the best teacher for all of us.
No doubt that knowledges gained from the experiences have a significant impact in our lives compared knowledges gained from books. Those kind of knowledges are the best way for us to learn somethig and do not forget for a long time because here the feelings are involved as well. Enything that makes us happy, sad, angry is hard to be be forgotten. For instance, I had seen and heard that students are very happy when they graduate from the university, but still wasn't sure what it means in real until I experienced it myself. From that day I can understand why they are so happy because I lerned it from my experience and not from the books.
Also, happenings that makes as to learn how to deal with, are unforgettable and a excellent experience for our next confront. For example, I was aware theorically, that if we have any emergency we should call 911, but I did not have any experience like that before. When the other day my grandmother was wery sick I had to call the emergency department, but din not have any idea how it works, like did not know what to expect from them. What are the possible questions they would ask me. After this experience I learnd things that I din not learn before.
Finally, there are some experiences that you can not learn them from the books, but you need the real experience by practicing that. Here I can think of how to tie the shoes. I was explaining to my son this couple times and still he was not sure haw to do that, until he saw me once and then started to practice over and over, and at last he succeed.
In summary, I would say that the experience is the one we need to have a succeed in our live path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, in summary, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41265060241 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62629012874 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9840280414 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233464957997 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833863443585 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107702173366 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122307795455 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924312267579 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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