What are the benefits and setbacks of studying abroad?
Studying abroad is a very challenging and good experience with all of its positivity and negativity happenings.
In my opinion, studying in a different place from where you were born is a exiting life. There are many benefits of being an abroad student. This is a very good opportunity to meet different people from different countries and learn about their cultures. Also, you will learn a different language. For example, I was studying in another state from where I was born for five years. I can say that this was my best time in my life because I got to know very good friends, I learned about their holidays, lifestyle and their foods that were very interesting.Also, except the diploma that I gained from my university I learned the language of that country. The TRAVELING to there was another unforgettable experience for me because I love to travel long distances.
On the other hand, studying abroad has its negativity as well. First, you are far away from your parents and family. As a student that made me very sad because I missed them very much. I was not able to be with them in many holidays as well.The expenses are another factor that influence the students and their family in a negative way. I had to pay for the traveling and also to rent an apartment that was very expensive back in time. Not living in your country for long time , makes it hard to make friends when you will be back. Because i lived couple years away from my country I had difficult time to make new friends when I got back.
In summary,no matter that are some setbacks, studying abroad is a good opportunity for everyone to be more open minded and more social in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, for example, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59531772575 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60278483338 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494983277592 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5862330734 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111651062777 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051637975462 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771170949885 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958767349434 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411984269427 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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