t has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.”
Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.
In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Use specifc reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is said that more you share your knowledge, the more it grows. For us, we can gain knowledge from various sources; for example reading books, working manulally on the projects, looking up on internet and the list goes on. It is not such that doing only one of them will help you to be a savant. For a person to be well versed with topics all aorund the world, be eclectic, he must be not only reading but also practicing it, sharing it with fellow collegues, applying it in day to day life.
Yes, to some extent books are important for us to gain knowledge, but we should not be limited to it. There may be various topics within book which can be difficult and for that purpose we should use the resources at our disposal.For example, a student of non-native english language is reading a novel and comes up with a word which he finds difficult to understand, then in such case, he should be looking up for the menaing of word, be it from dictionary, from internet, or ask anyone who may know the meaning. Then comes area where reading from books would definitely will not be enough. Many professional courses reuqires students to do certain amount of lab work prior to being given a graduate degree. Professional degrees related to medical sciences, engineering, cooking, designing and many more require you to spend some lab hours, perform some experiments and then only are they allowed to work on real life problems. As for professional degree, I would here like to give an instance where I was supposed to deliver a presentation on flow of fluid around an aerodynamic body, for which I was supposed to prepare. I could not prepare enough, and it should have been difficult for me to deliver the presentation. But, being well versed with the topic as I had worked on it as a part of my research project, I came up with a presentation for which was acclaimed to be the best presentation of the day.
From the beginning of our life only, as a baby we are taught to do things and we as a child are not supposed to read books for that, we practice those things. Eating, walking, talking, and many day to day activities, we do are not the ones we have read and learnt, rather it is a reuslt of constant practice over the years. The world is constanlty changing and it reuires one to be well informed of the topics to stand out in a crowd. It may be such that reading a book will help you, be enough for you, but little more knowledge will definitely not harm you.Thus in conclusion, I would like to agree with the statement that " Not everything that is learned is contained in the books."
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48739495798 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60264867016 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483193277311 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9468353957 48.9658058833 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149957358271 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523426755573 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571516499927 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115613278672 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234990361153 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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