Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I disagree with the proposed statement. personally saying, I think in twenty years there will not be fewer cars than today. Mankind is always been looking for finding a way to make their works easier, and cars are the best way of transporting. It is easy to work and needs a low cost.
Cars are easy to work for transporting and drive in ground ways. For example, we will not take great training to run them, as airplanes needs. Also, for running the car, we will not need to back up to guide us as the airports and monitoring systems do for the airplane. We just need to get in them and go where we want. Cars can easily place to parking spaces even beneath the ground. As a result, I do not think any vehicle will find to replacing with the car.
For another example, cars do not consume much fuel like other devices, even if we do not have any fuel left in the future, cars will work with other energies like by burning animal wastes or electricity.
Finally, there are many jobs which work by cars like taxi drivers or bringing food to people in their house. In these ways, people earn money to live, not just for going around by car and having fun.
To sum up, as I Explained by some examples; In my mind, cars are getting more because they have many advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, for example, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32217573222 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22676707876 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594142259414 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6231881998 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7857142857 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18664959267 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766554645864 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898409357967 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102362342182 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741968668728 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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