Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the proposed statement. some people think that such activities like sport and social activities are not much important at universities; personally saying, I think those activities have the same value as classes and libraries have. so, they must take sufficient financial support. because they are beneficial for the health and social behavior of students at university, also they can create incentives in the students to going to university. going to university, students can have fun besides their education.
for example, before I go to university, I did not have a sports schedule so, I was overweight and many times I felt tired, this had made me nervous and out of society but after I was accepted to the university I had free times between my classes so, I decided to go to the tennis team at university. in this way I could decrease my weight and I made new friends. now, I am not nervous anymore and I am with my friends any time that I want.
for another example, at university, I have some courses that are so much boring for me but I happily pass them to get to social activities like debating clubs that are after my class. so, it is really good for me because I would not lose my class when I have a motive.
moreover those examples, some sport competitions perform at my university when classes are over I can go there with my friends and have fun, in this way I do not go to bars or spending so much time watching television at home that causes me to eat junk food.
to sum up, I think activities like sports or social activities can give us better health and social behaviors also we can have fun and motive for our activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, moreover, really, so, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51827242525 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65842185586 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498338870432 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7109361633 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168965313778 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731369424595 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575429304703 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100588535336 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476795767838 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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