Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that since the dawn of civilization, sports and social activities have played a prevailing role in every individual's life. Perhaps the most important milepost of the university is gaining information; besides, sports and social works are as significant as classes and libraries. The inevitable question which has always caused heated debate among academicians is whether, at universities, sports are just as important as classes and should receive financial support or not. Therefore, a plethora of people are the leading proponents of the claim that a college is a place only for gathering data, reading books and don't need to hold any sports or social activities. Whereas others hold the exact opposite perspective and believe that sports are as essential as libraries and these activities need financial supports. I am, contrary to the first convention, inclined toward the opinion that universities need sports and social activities just as they need classes and libraries. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs will aptly elucidate a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that students especially M.s and Ph.D. students need sports and social activities like football, basketball, body building, swimming, etc. for refreshing their mood in the weekends. These activities assist them to do their works in the best way, so the more doing sport, the more developing in their fields. It is a very important that student has a good mood in the university and college. Take a personal experience as an example; when I was a student in university, I went to the club every Monday and swum in the pool. This sport helped me to more relax during the semesters so that I get a very high mark in semesters. The swimming has a very incredible role in my life, my work, my grade which I got them.
Furthermore, it is established beyond doubt that sports not only help students refreshing their mood but also help them revolutionized their life. Social activities help students boost their positive esteem, for when a person does sports inside of his work, a great amount ao dopamine is released in his mind. Dopamine is an especial hormone that is responsible for creating the sense of self-steeming in mind. As a result, sports increase the secreting of hormones and eradicate negative self-confidence.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that for developing sports in universities, the authorities of universities manage to decide social activities need to be focused in the hierarchy of funding options. Financial supports has a crucial role in increasing the equipment of sports activity. When tools of them are up-to-date, more students tend to go clubs and do sports. The noteworthy statistic, revealed by a recent social research conducted in universities, showed that the universities which have more up-to-date apparatus in their clubs, more students pay attention in sports and their health.
To recapitulate, all the aforementioned reasons converge to the point that holding sports activity and social activities should aim for universities with priority like the other classes. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are some other reasons and examples, challenging the claim, which is not mentioned above. Finally, it is suggested that a survey is conducted to find out whether students have experienced valuable results by doing sports in colleges or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2933.0 1977.66487455 148% => OK
No of words: 560.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2375 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99897463344 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492857142857 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 909.0 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8404460281 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.32 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249368394578 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705416784944 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630095332449 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141100563683 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789264506583 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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