Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
It is undeniable that classes and libraries are very important as a source of education at universities, and they deserve to get a high financial support due to their crucial influnce on the educational process. However, I believe that sports and social activities are as essential as classes and libraries, and they should recieve equal support. I feel this way for two reasons which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, the healty mind comes with the healthy body, and to build one people need to give their attension to their sport and activities. For instance, when my brother Ammar started his law school, he was very excited at the beginning, but after a year of studying, he got bored. It was very overwhelming and stressful for him to stand the high load of law school. When he was at his third year, he decided to quit, and to start studying a different major, until he meet his friend Sami, who told him to try to attend the sport club of the university before making any decision because he believes that sport will refresh his mind, and it will give him the needed energy to overcome law school difficulties. After one year of basketball practicing, Ammar now is a perfect lawyer, who graduated fro his school with high grades.
Second, sports and social activities are common in all universities and colleges, and they are a crucial way for determining the rank of each one. that is why supporting them financially helps in increasing the rate of the university. For example, our university used to have a low rank according to universities in the surrounding area, but since we attend the universities' olympics, and got the first place, our rating increased, and the number of students increased. Our university dean says that this was due to the support they gave to sport's club, which helped in preparing our team to this competition.
To sum up, I think that at universities and colleges, sports and social activities are as important as libraries ans classes, and they deserve to have an equal amount of financial support not only because they help in improving students' mood, but also they help in improving the position of any university according to others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79265091864 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.726383559 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514435695538 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.5650183099 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.461538462 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3076923077 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245515163698 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898905466034 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743102381455 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167523298931 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730864483638 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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