Which of the following activities do you think will be the most beneficial to the environment?
(l) Commute by biking or walking (2) Recycling (3) Eating a vegan diet
many activities have a positive effect on human life,such as commute by biking or walk, eating a vegan diet, or recycling. The question that arises here is which one is the most benificial to the environment? In my view, walking and using bicycles have more advantages than others for two reasons.
First, people can see the result of biking or walking instead of using cars or buses faster than other things that I have mentioned above. For instance, recycling will minimize adding new hazardous plastic to the earth, but it is not easy to remove the old ones. However, plastic decomposition takes thousands of years to be completed hundred percent. On the other hand, clearing the air from the effect of cars needs only few months. which then will starts to benifit the environment.
Second, using bikes or walking for transportation will not only improve the quality of breathing, but it also affects the overall well-being of people. For example, it is considered as exercising. that means it will help in decreasing people's body weight, reducing cholesterol level, and controlling diabetes. my mother started to walk to her office few months ago. she already lost 10 pounds, and her doctor told her that he saw an improvement in her levels. In addition to that, she could enjoy having fresh air early at the morning.
In conclusion, although there are many activities good for keeping our planet, but I think the most important one is to replace cars and buses with bicycles. it is not only has a quick effect, but also has benifits for both the environment and individuals. Moreover, I suggest to have special teams or organizations for awareness about the value of being healthy for the sake of ourselves, and to keep and protect the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87583892617 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.680275518 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620805369128 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9693256476 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4705882353 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229212582736 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646464528515 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681807477921 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137279989182 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753768293837 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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