Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that building a strong and long lasting relationship is not an easy thing to do, and there are many considerations for this kind of relations, such as caring, loyalty, and honesty. In my opinion, the most important consideration is to always tell the truth. I think this way for two reasons, which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, honesty or in another word telling the truth is a way to measure the trust between any two persons. If they tend to always tell the truth, it means that they trust each other, and there is no need to anything from their partner. For example, I remember my grandparent, they used to have very strong relationship, they were a lovely couple. My cousins and I used to call them love birds. Once, we were sitting in our back yard, and their cute smiles to each other got my attention, so I asked my grandmother about the reason that cause their relation to stand and face all difficulties. She smiled quietly and said that they always trusted each other. I asked her how did she know that, she told me that they never anything from each other, even if that going to cause a problem between them, she added that a small misunderstanding is better than breaking up or being disappointed by your spouse.
Second, lying is a bad thing to do in general, and a person who lie can do any other bad attitudes. For instance, if he lie easily, then he could steal or be rude easily, that what my mom used to tell me. In fact, I knew a person that all people thought that he is a good person, until we discoverd that he is a big lier. After that, all of his other sins came to the light, and we knew them one by one. He stole a watch from one of our friend, he acted badly with our seniors, and he cursed a lot. At the end, all of his friends broke up with him because they did not want to have a relation with such a bad person.
To sum up, I strongly believe that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people not only because it is a proof of a trust between couples or friends, but also it is an evidene of person's character and attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, in general, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28501228501 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48547143046 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523341523342 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3984842466 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217594654985 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751999509758 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792895907329 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152850607807 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065300357869 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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