Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that cars are essential things in people's life. It commute them, and in many case they represent how luxurious their life is. In my opinion, I disagree with the statment that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. I feel this way for two reasons, which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, people these days live by themselve without a family or friends, and each person needs his own car to use. Even if they live together they prefer to have their private commuting time. According to statistics the population is going to increase, which means there will be higher number of needed cars to satisfy those people. For instance, my older brother Ammar has five children, and two cars, one for him and one for his wife. Last month, I visited him in his house, und while we were having the dinner, I told him that having two cars is not a good idea, and it is better to use one car for both of them. My reason for that suggestion was that if they did so, they would participate in decreasing the polution. In response, my brother laughed a lot, and he said that in ten years they are going to have seven cars at their garage, one for every person in their house.
Second, by the years, young people are becoming more and more obsessed with cars models. Their only dream is to be able to buy the last edition of their dream car. In twenty years, with the increase of advertisements, there will be more young people who want to buy new cars, which means there will be millions new cars on streets. For example, my younger brother Abd is still at fifth grade, but he loves car to a level he could forget to eat if he is watching a car related TV show. Last week, he sent me a list of fifty cars, he planned to buy in the future. When I saw his list, I was sure that in every house with a teenager boy there is a similar list.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that cars numbers are going to be more in the next twenty years not only because of the life style of people, but also cars absession os increasing with time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'commutes'?
Suggestion: commutes
...re essential things in peoples life. It commute them, and in many case they represent h...
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Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun case seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cases'.
Suggestion: many cases
...n peoples life. It commute them, and in many case they represent how luxurious their life...
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Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d each person needs his own car to use. Even if they live together they prefer to have ...
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Line 2, column 502, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'having dinner'.
Suggestion: having dinner
...ted him in his house, und while we were having the dinner, I told him that having two cars is not...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecoming more and more obsessed with cars models. Their only dream is to be able t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25376884422 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20000235302 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515075376884 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9670642821 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0555555556 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128012480224 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482127807393 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383402093639 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855117374466 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252883136114 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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