Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's hectic life of universities, the role of sports and social activities cannot be disregarded. controversy exists over whether the financial support receive should be equal between sports activities and classes at universities. in my vantage point, financial support for sport and social activities are paramount importance in universities because not only can it work efficiently on their relationships of students, but also it is improving mental and physical health of students.
First, sport and activities can teach every student how they could work efficiently in their teams. That is to say, playing in all teams teach them many roles and requirements of a good understanding of team. for example, students can learn how could the work in team and strive for success of team or manage themselves and make plan to be success for team. In this part they should learn be flexible and not be selfish. Imagine student that attends volleyball classes and he knows the importance of teamwork. He will fight with everything for his team and work hard to be successful and he will always know teamwork is very important and is one of the keys to success. Therefore , team in sports and activities will lead to have a better relationship between students and boost up their knowledge.
Second, sport and social activities can teach other people in universities how they can play an important role to feel better. That is to say, learn how universities help students feel better and universities provide facilities for sports activities. For example, students feel better psychologically and activities like basketball, swimming, tennis, etc. then increase physical and mental health so that they cause student s to boss up their confidence and get good score. Imagine a student that she has a healthy mental. She can improve their confidence for their lecture and lessons to get the best score. Therefore , mental and physical health will lead to have a productive and useful universities in every aspect for students.
All in all, we do not disregarded use of sport and social activities in the universities since it can cement their relationships and it could effect on mental health .it is recommended that universities should better the financial support for sport and social activities so they could improve their mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90104329364 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4638556841 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198413846644 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712397788911 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801267013014 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16130777089 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919864748012 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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