It is hard to deny that many people in today's society may not tell their close related friends the truth in order to reduce their anxieties. As a result of this, many now hold the belief that telling the truth is the most critical factor in the interaction between people. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. As career development, efficiency, and social relationship are concerned, I strongly hold that being honest has the highest priority in people's relationships.
First and foremost, always telling the truth benefits a person's career, as this person can be considered as trustworthy. The leader may rely more on an employee who rarely makes up the truth as the work of an honest person is more accurate - he may not exaggerate the project data for gaining more attention. It will be easier for this kind of employees to get promotions in the future because of their high credit. Not to mention that people who misrepresent the fact may be revealed in the long term and probably have negative consequences if they continue telling the things with bias.
Furthermore, reducing the time to find excuses for an event indicates that telling the real situation can increase a person's efficiency. As a person who is credible can save time to come up with an alternative of the truth as well as fill the gap between fake and real, he can focus more on his work, which improves the person's efficiency. Take the example of my cousin, who usually deceives his parents. My cousin had failed in his Biology exam once, and he was afraid of handing his test paper to his parents. Therefore he told his parents that he got an A in that exam. His parents were extremely delighted about this and told all the relatives about this - his son has the ability to become a biologist. However, my cousin actually did not have any interest in biology and did not want to pay any hard work on it. As a result, he kept on making up his score, which took him a huge effort and time to disguise his real biology level. Had it not been for my cousin cheating his parents once, he would never need to hide his true grade every time.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that many people are misrepresenting the fact because they want to eliminate others worry. Ironically, such a claim is biased as their close relatives may discover the truth in long term, which may cause larger anxiety. In fact, others can do you a favor if they know you are in trouble. Therefore, being honest in relationships between others can enhance people's social relationships.
To conclude, from my perspective, telling the truth every time is the most vital point to be considered in any cooperation with others for the aspect of career development, efficiency, and social relationship. If everybody is being honest in the relationship, there will be less dispute and worry in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in fact, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2421.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78458498024 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70860633871 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490118577075 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9100071684 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.260869565 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0495147110169 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175308948009 0.076458572812 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224506356333 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.03151531768 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00790649867564 0.0645574589148 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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