Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solution that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teamwork duped as one of an essential part in managing problems. A lot of people think with more head, more ideas, therefore, more solution for the problem. However, I believe the contrary, based on my experience, the problem dissolved better when it is individually managed for several reasons.
First, a member of the team not always has a suitable competency to solve the problem. Yes, they could give us a different perspective on the matter through various education backgrounds, but their argument could do more harm than direct us to the solution. Take, for example, the doctor discussing management of head injury where patients need the expensive MRI since one of the members is insurance collector, he against the idea and think the CT scan more cost-effective. As a consequence, there is delayed in patients’ management.
Second, with too many heads, there will be a problem to reach a consensus. Especially with a lot of smart and capable team member, not only they could give a various solution but also the negative side of it.
For instance, when I work with a waste management team member, they could not decide where is the suitable location to build the main dump site since every member has a rightful reason to deny each other.
Finally, it is very hard to evaluate mistake with many people involved. What I mean is when the project took the wrong turn, we unable to detect the mistake early since there are a lot of task transfers in the team. Most of the times, we catch the mistake in the end of the program and it’s too late to mitigate it. This would not happen if there were only one person worked on the project.
The art of solving problem is very complicated with most of us agree that team-based approach is the best way. However, all things considered, I believe that a problem needs to be solved individually.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79813664596 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69146460383 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1155079963 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234662732483 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740012031417 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579599765157 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124766430362 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056417064022 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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