There is a debate among people about the conception that luck is more essential or labor to be successful. People achieve their goal because of their hard work and dedication. But some people believe that people can not be successful without favor of luck. I am concurred with the idea that people should be experienced, knowledgeable and tactile to face challenges and, believe that can lead them to kiss their destination. I will explain this idea in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, If people are intrigued about their responsibilities and endeavored in their tasks they can achieve experience in the related field. Moreover, their knowledge and expertise lead them to chase the peak. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. In my high school, I was weak in Science and I thought that I got fewer marks in exam because of my luck. But my parents suggested me to study hard and believe in my effort. As a result I studied hard and obtained good marks because of my hard labor.
Secondly, there is a saying " What you do, that you get" which means you get according to your deeds but not by luck. If your are capable to face challenges and incessant to your work, you learn more after you fall. Ultimately, you do not have to suffer from the word "failure". On the contrary, when you cease working and only wait for the time to be in your favor, you are only making castle in the air and nothing more.
Finally, when you show your interest and expertise in your work, employers trust you more and you get more responsibility in the office, where you get opportunity to learn about interpersonal skills and develop your confident level. Furthermore, you may get promotion which is progress in your career path. I remember, when I was working in an organization, because of my dedication, I used to identify the results that was beneficial to the project. In this way, I was upgraded to the District coordinator within a year which was virtually impossible.
To sum up, luck has nothing to do with success but with hard work that people engage for. To be realistic, they get chances to develop their career goals through their skills, opportunities, passion for their work which leads them to fulfill the dream they always dream about.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79012345679 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80555548765 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501234567901 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7084787547 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.380952381 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330696597682 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100119650022 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084646570767 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181638582552 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502122161309 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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