Younger people enjoy more than the older people

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Younger people enjoy more than the older people.

Every people make fun in their life whether they are aged or young. But there is always a debate among people saying people of what age are intrigued to enjoy their life. I definitely think that gangsters enjoy their life more than aged human beings as they have energy,capability of taking risk and eagerness to have experience in broad areas. I firmly believe that they are more encouraged to try abundant activities to relax. I will develop this idea in the subsequent paragraph.

To begin with, youth are amateur about various areas. Their enquisitiveness always fosters them risk bearing capacity and involve in adventurous activities as they do have more energy comparing to old generation. Because of their physical fitness and curiocity they try to have risky task which more exciting in human life. Moreover,in this situation they travel abundant places which helps them to make more friends and build broad circle of friendship. I have to admit that my own openion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. I remember that, when I was teenagers, I wanted to visit Thailand to see beach beacuse I never sasw beach befor that. When I visited there I was successful to develop relationship with people which helped me to visit different pubs and night club that was really exciting.

Secondly,teenagers do not have family responsiblity like our parents have to care family business and their jobs. Further more, free mind supports people whatever they want to do in their sapn of life. On the contrary, whether our seniors desire for going out and spending some quality time, it is not possible because of the barriers they have with hectic life. As a result, though parents always have to carry their responsiblity instead of going and partying all the time but because of the time and condition youth are able to do so.

Finally, older people already experience abundant things what they have to and they do not have any excitement doing the same thing again and again, so priority changes according to the age. For example, if they aready did paragliding, sky diving and many more, they have everything to share with companion. But for young people, many people encourage take risk for fulfill their desire as they do not to categorize their unlisted priority.

In ligh of the above mentioned reasons, older people have less chance for fun making accorinding to their prioritization for task, energy level and responsiblity as far as younger people have some couple thing to do in their life and have plenty time to fulfill desireness. And potentality to do those things is the another consequence of having fun for them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Every people make fun in their life whether t...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , capability
...an aged human beings as they have energy,capability of taking risk and eagerness to have ex...
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Line 1, column 430, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed to try abundant activities to relax. I will develop this idea in the subsequen...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...ch more exciting in human life. Moreover,in this situation they travel abundant pla...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , teenagers
...ub that was really exciting. Secondly,teenagers do not have family responsiblity like o...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...xample, if they aready did paragliding, sky diving and many more, they have everything to ...
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Line 9, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her consequence of having fun for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95982142857 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69565608022 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522321428571 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7688282601 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.80952381 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207383630308 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06586823155 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760253727882 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131692248035 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06940268166 0.0645574589148 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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