Food has become easier to prepare Has this change improved the way people live

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Food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

In current scenario, people can get recipe to prepare food if they like to cook cuisine because of the internet and media accessibility. To be specific, there are abundant online sites that teaches person to prepare food at home whatever they like. In particular, stores sell products that needed to in the kitchen. Because of the YOUTUBE, news papers and kitchen materials, amateur can have training about cooking and enhance their skills. Though it is simple to cook at home, it does not transform life of people as it was in the past for several reasons. I will explore this idea in the subsequent paragraph.

To begin with, people are engaged in abundant activities at a time. In the name of living modern and luxurious lifestyle, people do not have time to do the household activities like cooking, cleaning. They find instant to consume junk food than spending valuable time to cook. Instead of spending their time for cooking they prefer to work and buy food from restaurant. Though there are so many sources to teach cooking and easy access of seasoning items, people are not implementing it in their daily life.

Secondly, there are numerous restaurant who provide good taste of food with discount offers. They provide lunch and dinner virtually in the same price that we spend to cook the same dishes at home. If the people are getting food in a reasonable price without any burden, they do not desire to cook at home. But instead of that they spend time for some recreational activities or with their companion. As a result, people do not prepare food but buy and consume according to their taste and desire.

Finally, business policy of the restaurant is attracting customers and deter them to cook at home. In instance, home delivery system is playing significant role to attract the customers to buy food as it is so easy for people who do not have time to come to the café or to cook. To attract the customers who have got time, restaurants have arranged recreational activities like live music, online games, children friendly environment and influencing them to come to the place and spend their time. So people like to have some good time in outside to refresh themselves from hectic life because they do not involve themselves in the kitchen.

In light of the above mentioned reasons, though nowadays, its easy to make food but because of the business concept, advancement of technology and many more reasons restaurants are thriving and people are not spending their time in kitchen.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, in particular, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86713286713 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55958279334 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459207459207 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1831609328 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147564777769 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054800399554 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439828143332 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095820292651 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269647656145 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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