Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
What type and content of work play a dominant role when finding the work, which induced a debated issue. Some are adamant that facing different types of tasks during the workday is what workers pursue, while others squarely hold the opposite statement. In my view, a variety of tasks can inspire a worker to focus on and enjoy the work. More reasons might be shed light on as follows.
First and foremost, many different types of tasks may inspire people's spirits to grapple and wrestle with every task during the workday. It is because that no matter what task they encounter they may not feel bored, which enhances workers' concentration. Take the research sector of the high-tech company as an example. they should manage different kinds of tasks to improve their products so that can increases the influence in the market and the company's surplus. Thus, it is easy to find that workers in the research sector have a higher fight spirit to face problems. On the contrary, workers in the manufacturing sector, which always do the same work such as a machine, have no energy and enthusiasm for the work, which is fully in contrast to the research sector.
In addition, managing different kinds of assignments is beneficial to workers' mental health since they have the goal of their life. They should keep resolving many problems and difficulties during the workday and still thinking of the adversity they probably will face in the future due to the different tasks. Moreover, they can maintain their competitiveness which results from the experience they coping with problems. If they have the ability to deal with different tasks in the working environment, they are hard to be replaced by other workers, which are hired every year. Therefore, they might be satisfied with their situation with different work.
Last but not least, different types of task often means work of high salary. Few workers are capable to manage different kinds of tasks during the workday, so their boss might give these workers higher salaries to maintain the company's competitiveness. For example, TSMC, which is the most significant incorporation in Taiwan, prefers employing people who can cope with different tasks and many Taiwanese workers are willing to accept the difficulty. My father, fortunately, is an employee in TSMC and he always tells me that he is really enjoying the work right now because of riching in the challenge from different types of tasks.
Inc conclusion, workers are more fulfilled when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday. It is because that different types of tasks make them inspire the spirit to challenge, have a healthful mental and do a high-salary work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9955654102 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61064606632 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478935698448 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8813159341 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4761904762 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361274442603 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124791318669 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966214069943 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241013791713 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916039370184 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.